And an interesting exercise in the tension a story can create through the default intrinsic sympathy given to a point-of-view character. Who turns out not to be the victim here at *all*.
Jo - I continue to be your fan. This is a perfect example of a simple idea told exceptionally well. Hitchcock would be very pleased. And the color is tops!
Wow... that was amazing! I completely didn't expect the twist at the end (and I'm *very* creeped out, but in such a good way!), and it broadsided me. Enough that I'm a little breathless. *grin*
And of course, me being me, the "twins" thing made me grin like a loon. But you know that. *snicker*
This was incredible. I love the darkness of this comic, and right from the start BAM you get the feeling something creepy's coming and it's amazingly delivered. I loved ALL of this
So great to see something new and different from you, not to mention much more in line with my sensibilities. I'll add to the chorus calling it Hitchcockian. It really is. Stellar work!