After the Coup

After the Coup

illustration by john harris

“How well can you take a punch?” asked Deputy Ambassador Schmidt.

Lieutenant Harry Wilson blinked and set down his drink. “You know, there are a number of places a conversation can go after a question like that,” he said. “None of them end well.”

“I don’t mean it like that,” Schmidt said. He drummed the glass of his own drink with his fingers. Harry noted the drumming, which was a favorite nervous tell of Hart Schmidt’s. It made poker games with him fun. “I have a very specific reason to ask you.”

“I would hope so,” Harry said. “Because as conversational ice breakers go, it’s not in the top ten.”

Schmidt looked around the Clarke’s officer lounge. “Maybe this isn’t the best place to talk about it,” he said.

Harry glanced around the lounge. It was singularly unappealing; a bunch of magnetized folding chairs and equally magnetized card tables, and single porthole from which the yellowish green limb of Korba-Aty was glowing, dully. The drinks they were having came from the rack of vending machines built into the wall. The only other person in the lounge was Lieutenant Grant, the Clarke’s quartermaster; she was looking at her PDA and wearing headphones.

“It’s fine, Hart,” Harry said. “Enough with the melodrama. Spit it out already.”

“Fine,” Schmidt said, and then drummed on his drink some more. Harry waited. “Look, this mission isn’t going well,” he finally said.

“Really,” Harry said, dryly.

“What’s that supposed to mean?” Schmidt said.

“Don’t get defensive, Hart,” Harry said. “I’m not blaming you.”

“I just want to know how you came to that conclusion,” Schmidt said.

“You mean, how did I come to that conclusion despite the fact I’m this mission’s mushroom,” Harry said.

Schmidt frowned. “I don’t know what that means,” he said.

“It means that you keep me in the dark and feed me shit,” Harry said.

“Ah,” Schmidt said. “Sorry.”

“It’s fine,” Harry said. “This is a Colonial Union diplomatic mission, and I’m Colonial Defense Forces, and you don’t want me seen by the Korba because you don’t want my presence to be interpreted as provocation. So while the rest of you head down to the planet, and get to breathe real air and see actual sunlight, I stay up here in this latrine of a spaceship, training your technicians to use the field generator and catching up on my reading. Which is going well, incidentally. I just finished Anna Karenina.”

“How was it?” Schmidt said.

“Not bad,” Harry said. “The moral is to stay away from trains. The point is, I know why I’m kept in the dark. Fine. Fair enough. But I’m not stupid, Hart. Even if none of you tell me anything about the mission, I can tell it’s not going well. All of you deputies and assistants come back to the Clarke looking like you’ve had the crap beat out of you all day long. It’s a subtle hint.” He picked up his drink and slugged some back.

“Hmm. Anyway, yes,” Schmidt said. “The mission isn’t going well. The Korba haven’t been nearly as receptive to our negotiations as we thought they might be. We want to try something new. A new direction. A new diplomatic tack.”

“A new tack that is somehow focused on me getting punched,” Harry said, setting his drink back down.

“Maybe,” Schmidt said.

“Once or repeatedly?” Harry asked.

“I think that would depend on your definition,” Schmidt said.

“Of ‘once’?” Harry asked.

“Of ‘punched,’ actually,” Schmidt said.

“I already have very deep reservations about this plan,” Harry said.

“Well, let me give you some context,” Schmidt said.

“Please do,” Harry said.

Schmidt produced his PDA and began to slide it over to Harry, then stopped midway through the motion. “You know that everything I’m about to tell you is classified.”

“Good lord, Hart,” Harry said. “I’m the only person on the Clarke who doesn’t know what’s going on.” Harry reached over and took the PDA. On its screen was the image of a battle cruiser of some sort, floating near a skyscraper. Or more accurately, what was left of a skyscraper; it had been substantially destroyed, likely by the battle cruiser. In the foreground of the picture, small, vaguely-humanoid blotches seemed to be running from the ruined skyscraper. “Nice picture,” Harry said.

“What do you think you’re seeing there?” Schmidt said.

“A strong case for not letting trainees drive a battle cruiser,” Harry said.

“It’s an image taken during the recent Korban coup,” Schmidt said. “There was a disagreement between the head of the military and the Korban civilian leadership. That skyscraper is—well, was—the Korban administrative headquarters.”

“So the civilians lost that particular argument,” Harry said.

“Pretty much,” Schmidt said.

“Where do we come in?” Harry asked, handing back the PDA. “Are we trying to restore the civilian government? Because, to be honest about it, that doesn’t really sound like something the CU would care about.”

“We don’t,” Schmidt said, taking back the PDA. “Before the coup, the Korba were barely on our radar at all. They had a non-expansionist policy. They had their few worlds and they’d stood pat on them for centuries. We had no conflict with them, so we didn’t care about them. After the coup, the Korba are very interested in expanding again.”

“This worries us,” Harry said.

“Not if we can point them toward expanding in the direction of some of our enemies,” Schmidt said. “There are some races in this area who are pushing in on us. If they had to worry about someone else, they’d have fewer resources to hit us with.”

“See, that’s the Colonial Union I know,” Harry said. “Always happy to stick a knife in someone else’s face. But none of this has anything to do with me getting punched in the face.”

“Actually, it does,” Schmidt said. “We made a tactical error. This mission is a diplomatic one, but the new leaders of Korba are military. They’re curious about our military, and they’re especially curious about our CDF soldiers, whom they’ve never encountered because our races have never fought. We’re civilians; we don’t have any of our military on hand, and very little in terms of military capability to show them. We brought them that field generator you’ve been training our technicians on, but that’s defensive technology. They’re much more interested in our offensive capabilities. And they’re especially interested in seeing our soldiers in action. Negotiations up to this point have been going poorly because we’re not equipped to give them what they want. But then we let it slip that we have a CDF member on the Clarke.”

We let it slip,” Harry said.

“Well, I let it slip, actually,” Schmidt said. “Come on, Harry, don’t look at me like that. This mission is failing. Some of us need this mission to succeed. My career’s not exactly on fire, you know. If this mission goes into the crapper, I’m going to get reassigned to an archive basement.”

“I’d be more sympathetic if saving your career didn’t require blunt force trauma for me,” Harry said.

Schmidt nodded, and then ducked his head a little, which Harry took as something akin to an apology. “When we told them about you, they got very excited, and we were asked by the Korbans’ new leader—a direct request from the head of state, Harry—if we would be willing to pit you against one of their soldiers in a contest of skills,” Schmidt said. “It was strongly implied it would make a real difference in the tenor of the negotiations.”

“So of course you said yes,” Harry said.

“Let me remind you of the part where I said the mission was going into the crapper,” Schmidt said.

“There is a small flaw in this plan,” Harry said. “Besides the part where I get the crap kicked out of me, I mean. Hart, I’m CDF, but I’m not a soldier. I’m a technician. I’ve spent the last several years working in the military science division of the Forces. That’s why I’m here, for God’s sake. I’m training your people to use technology we developed. I’m not training them to fight, I’m training them to twirl knobs.”

“You’ve still got the CDF genetic engineering,” Schmidt said, and pointed to Harry’s sitting form. “Your body is still in top physical shape, whether you use it or not. Your reflexes are still fast as ever. You’re still as strong as ever. Look at you, Harry. There’s nothing flabby or squishy about you. You’re in as good a shape as any soldier on the line.”

“That doesn’t mean anything,” Harry said.

“Doesn’t it?” Schmidt said. “Tell me, Harry. Everyone else on this mission is an unmodified human. Is there any one of us that you couldn’t take in hand to hand combat?”

“Well, no. But you’re all soft,” Harry said.

“Thanks for that,” Schmidt said. He took a sip of his drink.

“My point is whether or not I’m engineered for combat, I haven’t been a soldier for a very long time,” Harry said. “Fighting isn’t like riding a bicycle, Hart. You can’t just pick it up without practice. If these guys are so hot to see CDF in action, send a skip drone back to Phoenix and request a squad. They could be here in a couple of days if you make it a priority request.”

“There’s no time, Harry,” Schmidt said. “The Korba want a combat exhibition tonight. Actually,”—Schmidt checked the chronometer on his PDA—“in about four and a half hours.”

“Oh, come on,” Harry said.

“They made the request this morning, Harry,” Schmidt said. “It’s not like I’ve been keeping it from you. We told them about you, they made the request and ten minutes later I was being hustled off to the shuttle back to the Clarke to tell you. And here we are.”

“What is this ‘skill contest’ they want me to have?” Harry asked.

“It’s a ritualized combat thing,” Schmidt said. “It’s physical combat, but it’s done as a sport. Like karate or fencing or wrestling. There are three rounds. You get scored on points. There are judges. From what I understand it’s mostly harmless. You’re not going to be in any real danger.”

“Except for being punched,” Harry said.

“You’ll heal,” Schmidt said. “And anyway, you can punch back.”

“I don’t suppose I can pass,” Harry said.

“Sure, you can pass,” Schmidt said. “And then when the mission fails and everyone on the mission is demoted into shit jobs and the Korba ally themselves with our enemies and start looking at human colonies they can pick off, you can bask in the knowledge that at least you came out of this all unbruised.”

Harry sighed and drained his drink. “You owe me, Hart,” he said. “Not the Colonial Union. You.”

“I can live with that,” Schmidt said.

“Fine,” Harry said. “So the plan is to go down there, fight with one of their guys, get beat up a little, and everyone walks away happy.”

“Mostly,” Schmidt said.

Mostly,” Harry said.

“I have two requests for you from Ambassador Abumwe,” Schmidt said. “And she said for me to say to that by ‘request,’ she means that if you don’t do them both she will find a way to make the rest of your natural existence one of unceasing woe and misery.”

“Really,” Harry said.

“She was very precise about her word use,” Schmidt said.

“Lovely,” Harry said. “What are the requests?”

“The first is that you keep the contest close,” Schmidt said. “We need to show the Korba from the start that the reputation the CDF has is not undeserved.”

“Not knowing what the rules of the contest are, how it’s played or whether I’m even physically capable of keeping up with it, sure, why not, I’ll keep it close,” Harry said. “What’s the other request.”

“That you lose,” Schmidt said.


* * *


“The rules are simple,” Schmidt said, translating for the Korban who stood in front of them. Normally Harry would use his BrainPal—the computer in his head—to do a translation, but he didn’t have access to the Clarke’s network to access the language. “There are three rounds: One round with Bongka—those are like quarterstaffs, Harry—one round of hand-to-hand combat, and one round of water combat. There are no set times for any round; they continue until all three judges have selected a victor, or until one of the combatants is knocked unconscious. The chief judge here wants to make sure you understand this.”

“I understand,” said Harry, staring at the Korban, who came up, roughly, to his waist. The Korba were squat, bilaterally symmetrical, apparently muscular, and covered by what appeared to be an infinite amount of overlapping plates and scales. What little information Harry could uncover about the Korban physiology suggested that they were of some sort of amphibious stock, and that they lived some of their lives in water. This would at least explain the “water combat” round. The gathering hall they were in held no obvious water sources, however. Harry wondered if something might not have been lost in translation.

The Korban began speaking again, and as he spoke and breathed, the plates around his neck and chest moved in a motion that was indefinably strange and unsettling; it was almost like they didn’t quite go back in the same place they started off at. Harry found them unintentionally hypnotic.

“Harry,” Schmidt said.

“Yes?” Harry said.

“You’re all right with the nudity?” Schmidt asked.

“Yes,” Harry said. “Wait. What?”

Schmidt sighed. “Pay attention, Harry,” he said. “The contest is performed in the nude so that it’s purely a test of skill, no tricks. You’re okay with that?”

Harry glanced around the gymnasium-like room they were in, filling up with Korban spectators, human diplomats and Clarke crew members on shore leave. In the crowd of humans he located Ambassador Abumwe, who gave him a look that reinforced her earlier threat of unending misery. “So everyone gets to see my bits,” Harry said.

“Afraid so,” Schmidt said. “All right, then?”

“Do I have a choice?” Harry asked.

“Not really,” Schmidt said.

“Then I guess I’m all right with it,” Harry said. “See if you can get them to crank up the thermostat.”

“I’ll look into it.” Schmidt said something to the Korban, who replied at length. Harry doubted they were actually speaking about the thermostat. The Korban turned and uttered a surprisingly loud blast, his neck and chest plates spiking out as he did so. Harry was suddenly reminded of a horny toad back on Earth.

From across the room another Korban approached, holding a staff just under two meters in length, with the ends coated in what appeared to be red paint. The Korban presented it to Harry, who took it. “Thanks,” he said. The Korban ran off.

The judge started speaking. “He says that they apologize that they are unable to give you a more attractive Bongka,” Schmidt translated, “but that your height meant they had to craft one for you specially, and they did not have time to hand it over to an artisan. He wants you to know, however, that it is fully functional and you should not be at any disadvantage. He says you may strike your opponent at will with the bongka, and on any part of the body, but only with the tips; using the unmarked part of the bongka to strike your opponent will result in lost points. You can block with the unmarked part, however.”

“Got it,” Harry said. “I can hit anywhere? Aren’t they worried about someone losing an eye?”

Schmidt asked. “He says that if you manage to take an eye, then it counts. Every hit or attack with a tip is fair.” Schmidt was quiet for a moment as the judge spoke at length. “Apparently the Korba can regenerate lost limbs and some organs, eventually. They don’t see losing one as a huge problem.”

“I thought you said there were rules, Hart,” Harry said.

“My mistake,” Schmidt said.

“You and I are going to have a talk after all of this is done,” Harry said.

Schmidt didn’t answer this because the judge had started speaking again. “The judge wants to know if you have a second. If you don’t have one he will be happy to provide you one.”

“Do I have a second?” Harry said.

“I didn’t know you needed one,” Schmidt said.

“Hart, please make an effort to be useful to me,” Harry asked.

“Well, I’m translating,” Schmidt said.

“I only have your word for that,” Harry said. “Tell the judge that you’re my second.“

“What? Harry, I can’t,” Schmidt said. “I’m supposed to be sitting with the Ambassador.”

“And I’m supposed to be in a bunk on the Clarke reading the first part of The Brothers Karamazov,” Harry said. “Clearly this is a disappointing day for both of us. Suck it up, Hart. Tell him.”

Schmidt told him; the judge started speaking at length to Schmidt, chest and neck plates shifting as he did so. Harry glanced back over to the seating area provided the Colonial Union diplomats and Clarke crew, who shifted in their rows. The stands were half-sized for humans; they sat with their knees bunched into their chests like parents at a pre-school open house. They didn’t look in the least bit comfortable.

Good, thought Harry.

The judge stopped speaking, turned toward Harry, and did something with his scales that caused a wave-like ripple to go around his head. Harry shuddered involuntarily; the judge seemed to take that as a response. He left.

“We’re going to start in just a minute,” Schmidt said. “Now might be a good time for you to strip.”

Harry set down his bongka and took off his jacket. “I don’t suppose you’re going to strip,” he said. “Being my second and all.”

“The judge didn’t say anything about it in the job description,” Schmidt said. He took the jacket from Harry.

“What is your job description?” Harry asked.

“I’m supposed to research your opponent and give you tips on how to beat him,” Schmidt said.

“What do you know about my opponent?” Harry asked. He was out of his shirt and was slipping off his trousers.

“My guess is that he will be short,” Schmidt said.

“How do I beat him?” Harry said. He slipped of his shoes and let his toes test the spongy flooring.

“You’re not supposed to beat him,” Schmidt said. “You’re supposed to tie and then take a fall.”

Harry grunted and handed Schmidt his pants, socks and shoes. “Am I correct in assuming that there are several species of legume that would do a better job being my second than you, Hart?”

“Sorry, Harry,” Schmidt said. “I’m flying by the seat of my pants here.”

“And my pants,” Harry said.

“I guess that’s true,” Schmidt said. He looked at the nude Harry and counted the number of apparel he was holding. “Where’s your underwear?” he asked.

“Today was laundry day,” Harry said.

“You went commando to a diplomatic function?” Schmidt asked. The horror in his voice was unmistakable.

“Yes, Hart, I went commando to a diplomatic function,” Harry said, and then motioned to his body. “And now, as you can see, I’m going Spartan so a midget can whack me with a stick.” He bent and picked up his Bongka. “Honestly, Hart. Help me out here. Focus a little.”

“All right,” Hart said, and glanced at the pile of clothes he was holding. “Let me just put these somewhere.” He started off toward the human seating area.

As Hart did this, three Korba approached Harry. One was the judge from earlier. Another Korban was carrying his own bongka, proportional to his own height; Harry’s opponent. The third was a step behind Harry’s opponent; Harry guessed it was the other second.

The three Korba stopped directly in front of Harry. The one holding the bongka handed it to his second, looked up at Harry, and then thrust out his hands, palms forward, making a grunting noise as he did so. Harry hadn’t the slightest idea what to do with this. So he handed his bongka to Schmidt, who had just come running up, thrust his own hands forward, and returned the motion. “Jazz hands,” Harry said.

The Korban seemed satisfied, took back his bongka, and headed toward the other side of the gym. The judge spoke, and held up something in his hand. “He says that they’re ready to begin,” Schmidt said. “He will signal the start of the round with his horn, and will use it again at the end of the round. When the round ends, there will be a few minutes while they set up for the next round. You can use that time to rest and to confer with your second. Do you understand?”

“Yes, fine,” Harry said. “Let’s get to it, already.” Schmidt responded; the judge walked off. Harry began working with the bongka, testing its balance and warp. It felt like it was made of a hard wood of some sort; he wondered if it would splinter or break.

“Harry,” Schmidt said, and pointed to where the judge stood, horn raised high. “We’re starting.”

Harry held his bongka in both hands, chest high, horizontal to the ground. “Any last pieces of advice?” he asked.

“Aim low,” Schmidt said, and backed off the floor.

“Great,” Harry said. The judge blasted his horn and moved to the side of the gym. Harry stepped forward with his bongka, keeping his eye on his opponent.

His opponent raised his bongka, expanded his chest and neck by an alarming amount, emitted a deafening noise somewhere between a belch and a roar, and launched himself at Harry as fast as his little feet could carry him. The Korba in the stands, ringing the gym save for the small section for the humans, cheered mightily in a similar chest-inflating, burping fashion.

Three seconds later Harry was confronted by the fact that he had absolutely no clue what he was doing. The Korban had set on him with a slashing, dizzying array of bongka maneuvers; Harry blocked about a third of them and avoided the rest by stumbling backward as the Korban pressed his advantage. The Korban was whirling his bongka like a rotor blade. Harry realized that having the longer bongka was not an advantage here; it took longer to swing, block and attack. The little Korban had the upper hand, as it were.

The Korban lunged at Harry and appeared to overextend; Harry swung his bongka overhead to try to tap him on the backside. As he did the Korban twisted inside the arc of Harry’s attack; Harry realized he’d been played just as the Korban viciously whacked both of his ankles. Harry went down; the Korban jumped back just far enough to begin enthusiastically tenderizing Harry’s midsection as he fell. Harry rolled and blindly thrust his bongka at the Korban; somewhat improbably, it connected, poking the Korban in its snout. The poke fazed the Korban into stopping its attack and taking a step back. Harry poked it back a couple more steps and then stood up, testing his ankles. They complained but held.

“Keep poking him!” Schmidt yelled. Harry glanced over to snap something back, giving the Korban an opening. He took it, whacked Harry hard upside the head, then reapplied himself to Harry’s ankles. Harry stumbled but kept upright, wheeling in a drunken fashion toward the center of the gym. The Korban followed, swinging merrily at Harry’s already bruised ankle bones. Harry got the distinct feeling he was being toyed with.

Screw this, Harry thought, and stopped, planted his bongka firmly into the gym mat and hurled himself up the staff. A second later he was doing a handstand at the top of it, balanced by dint of his finely calibrated if disused motor control, courtesy of the Colonial Defense Forces genetic engineering.

The Korban, clearly not expecting this tactic, stopped and openly gawked.

“That’s right,” Harry said. “Come whack on my ankles now, you little prick.“

Harry continued to feel smug about his plan right until the moment the Korban crouched and launched itself into the air with a push of its powerful legs. The Korban didn’t make it as high as Harry’s ankles. He did, however, get right on level with Harry’s face.

Oh, crap, Harry thought, before the blinding crack of a bongka smashed across the bridge of his nose and robbed him of any further capacity for reaction, commentary or thought. All those things came back to him with blinding pain as Harry’s spinal column compressed into the gym mat as he fell. After that there were a few moments of curiously distant sensation as the Korban’s bongka dug into various parts of his body, followed by an even more distant blast of a horn. The first round was over. The Korba strutted off to the sound of belching applause; Harry propped himself up on his bongka and staggered over to Schmidt, who had found him a water bottle.

“Are you okay?” Schmidt said.

“Are you dumb?” Harry said. He took the water bottle and squirted some of the water on his face.

“I’m kind of wondering what the thinking was on that handstand,” Schmidt said.

“The thinking was that if I didn’t do something my ankle bones would be a fine powder,” Harry said.

“What were you going to do then?” Schmidt asked.

“I don’t know,” Harry said. “I was in a rush, Hart. I was making it up as I went along.”

“I don’t think it worked the way you wanted it to,” Schmidt said.

“Well, maybe if I had a second who told me these little bastards could high jump two meters straight up from a squat, I would have tried something else,” Harry said.

“Fair point,” Schmidt said.

“Anyway, you want me to lose, remember?” Harry said.

“Yes, but we want you to lose by just a little,” Schmidt said. “You need to keep it closer than this. Ambassador Abumwe is glaring a hole through the back of your head right now. No, don’t look.“

“Hart, if I could have made it closer I would have,” Harry said. He drank some water and then stretched, trying to find a place on his body that didn’t hurt. His left instep seemed the most likely candidate. Harry glanced down and was glad the Korban had not seemed aware that human testicles were especially painful when struck; his had managed to escape injury.

“Looks like they’re ready for the second round,” Schmidt said, and pointed at the judge, who was standing with his horn. On the other end of the gym the Korban was hopping from foot to foot, loosening himself up for the hand-to-hand combat.

“Swell,” Harry said, and handed the water bottle back to Schmidt. “Words of wisdom for this round?”

“Mind your ankles,” Schmidt said.

“You’re a big help,” Harry said. The horn blew and he stepped back onto the gym floor.

The Korban wasted no time fronting an offensive, charging Harry almost as soon as he was on the floor. A few meters out the Korban kicked and launched himself into the air, claws out; he was aiming for Harry’s head.

Not this time, you son of a bitch, Harry thought, and pushed himself back and toward the gym floor. The Korban slid just over Harry’s head, slashing as he did so; Harry responded by bringing up a leg and delivering to the Korban’s posterior a truly excellent bicycle kick. The Korban suddenly accelerated head first into the stands, colliding violently into several other Korba, whose refreshments went flying. Harry arched his head from a lying position to see the carnage, then glanced over to Schmidt, who gave him an enthusiastic thumbs up. Harry grinned and picked himself off the floor.

The Korban burst out of the stands, enraged and refreshment-coated, and launched himself once more and incautiously at Harry. Being suddenly and humiliatingly launched into the stands had apparently simplified the Korban’s attack strategy down to tear the human a new one. Harry didn’t mind.

The Korban approached and wheeled back to deliver a mighty blow, either to Harry’s midsection or genital region, whichever was closer. Harry responded by holding steady until the last second and then shot out his arm. The Korban’s forward motion smacked to standstill as Harry’s left palm met the little alien’s forehead. It was like stopping a particularly aggressive eight year old. Harry smirked.

The Korban was not amused at what it registered as a condescending defense maneuver on Harry’s part; it burp-snarled its rage and prepared to shred Harry’s forearm. Harry reared back his right arm to slug the Korban, distracting it, and then quickly retracted his left palm, made a loose fist, and popped the Korban in the face. The Korban snorted in alarm; Harry took that moment to bring his right hook square into the Korban’s snout.

The scales and plates of the Korban’s face puffed out as if the alien’s head was a flower traumatized into blossom; they settled back as the Korban collapsed onto the ground. Harry kept him on the ground by kicking it viciously every time it so much as puffed a plate. Eventually the judges got bored with this and blew their horn. Harry walked off the floor; the Korban’s second came and dragged him off.

“I think you might have overdone the kicking,” Schmidt said, handing Harry his refilled water bottle.

“You’re not the one whose kidneys were mashed into pâté in the first round,” Harry said. “I was just giving him what he gave me. He was still breathing at the end of the round. He’s fine. And now the contest is closer, which is what you wanted.” He drank.

A door opened on the side of the gymnasium and a forklift-like contraption drove in, carrying what appeared to be a large kiddie pool full of water. The pool was set down near Harry; the forklift then retreated, to reappear a minute later with another pool, which it set down near Harry’s Korban competitor.

Harry looked over at Schmidt, who shrugged. “For the water combat round?” He ventured.

“What are we going to do, splash each other?” Harry asked.

“Look,” Schmidt said, and pointed. The Korban competitor, now somewhat recovered, had stepped into his pool. The judge, standing again in the middle of the gym, motioned at Harry to step into his pool. Harry looked at Schmidt, who shrugged again. “Don’t ask me,” he said.

Harry sighed and stepped into his own pool; the water, very warm, came up to his mid-thigh. Harry fought back the temptation to sit down in it and have a nice soak. He looked over again to Schmidt. “Now what do I do?” he asked.

Schmidt didn’t respond. Harry waved his hand in front of Schmidt. “Hart. Hello?” he said.

Schmidt looked over to Harry. “You’re going to want to turn around, Harry,” he said.

Harry turned around, and looked at his Korban competitor, who was suddenly about a foot taller than he had been, and growing.

What the hell? Harry thought. And then he saw it. The level of the water in the Korban’s pool was almost slowly falling; as it did, the scales and plates on the Korban were shifting, sliding against each other and separating out. Harry watched as the scales on the Korban’s mid-section appeared to stretch apart and the join, as the plates that used to be underneath locked into place with the plates that used to be above, expanded by the water flooding into the Korban’s body from the pool. Harry eyes shifted from the Korban’s midsection to its hands, where its digits were expanding by rotating the overlapping scales, locking them together into a previously unknown dance of Fibonacci sequences.

Harry’s mind thought of several things at once.

First, he marveled at the absolutely stunning physiology of the Korbans on display here; the scales and plates covering their bodies were not simply integumentary but had to be structural as well, holding the shape of the Korban body in both states; Harry doubted there was an internal skeleton, at least as it was understood in a human body, and the earlier puffing and expanding suggested that the Korbans’ structural system used both air and water to do certain and specific things; this species was clearly the anatomical find of the decade.

Second, he shuddered at the thought of whatever evolutionary pressure had caused the Korban—or its distant amphiboid ancestors—to develop such a dramatic defense mechanism. Whatever was out there in the early seas of this planet, it had to have been pretty damn terrifying.

Third, as the Korban forced water into its body, growing to a size now a square of the size and some terrifying cube of the mass of Harry’s own dimensions, he realized he was about to get his ass well and truly kicked.

Harry wheeled on Schmidt. “You can’t tell me you didn’t know about this,” he said.

“I swear to you, Harry,” Schmidt said. “This is new to me.”

“How can you miss something like this?” Harry said. “What the hell do you people do all day?”

“We’re diplomats, Harry, not xenobiologists,” Schmidt said. “Don’t you think I would have told you?”

The judge’s horn sounded. The towering Korban stepped out of his pool with a hammering thud.

“Oh, shit,” Harry said. He splashed as he tried to get out of his own pool.

“I have no advice for you,” Schmidt said.

“No kidding,” Harry said.

“Oh, God, here he comes,” Schmidt said, and then stumbled off the floor. Harry looked up just in time to see an immense fist of flesh, water and fluid dynamics pummel into his midsection and send him flying across the room. Some part of Harry’s brain remarked on the mass and acceleration required to lift him like that, even as another part of Harry’s brain remarked that at least a couple of ribs had just gone with that punch.

The crowd roared its approval.

Harry groggily took stock of his surroundings just as the Korban stomped up, lifted up its immense foot, and brought it down square on Harry’s chest, giving him the sensation of involuntary defibrillation. Harry watched as the foot lifted up again and noted two large hexagonal depressions in them. The part of his brain that had earlier marveled at the physiology of the Korba recognized these as the places where the body would take in water; they would have to be at least that large to grow the body as quickly as it did.

The rest of Harry’s brain told that part to shut the hell up and move, because that foot was coming down again. Harry groaned and rolled, and bounced a little as the impact of the foot on the floor where Harry had just been caused everything to vibrate. Harry crawled away and then scrambled to his feet, narrowly missing a kick that would have sent him into a wall.

The Korban lumbered after Harry, swinging at him as the crowd cheered. The alien was quick because its size allowed it to cover distance quickly, but as it swung at Harry, he realized that its attacks were slower than they were before. There was too much inertia going on here for the Korban to turn on a dime or make quick strikes. Harry suspected that when two Korba fought in this round, they basically stood in the middle of the gym and beat the hell out of each other until one of them collapsed. That strategy wouldn’t work here. Harry thought back on the first round, where the smaller Korba’s size was an advantage—size and the fact it knew its way around a bongka. Now the situations were reversed; Harry’s smaller size could work to his advantage, and the Korban, in this size, wouldn’t know how to fight something smaller.

Let’s test that, Harry thought, and suddenly ran at the Korba. The Korba took a mighty swing at Harry; Harry ducked it, got in close, and jammed an elbow into the Korban’s midsection. Whereupon he discovered to his dismay that thanks to their engorgement, hitting the Korban’s plates was just like punching concrete.

Oops, Harry thought, and then screamed as the Korban grabbed him by his hair and lifted him. Harry caught hold of the arm lifting him so his scalp wouldn’t tear off. The Korban commenced punching him in the ribs, cracking a few more. Through the pain, Harry levered himself on the Korban’s arm and kicked upward, jamming his big toe into the Korban’s snout; clearly it was the one body part of the Korban’s that Harry was having luck with today. The Korban howled and dropped Harry; he flopped down and thudded to the floor on his back. Before he could roll away the Korban stamped on his chest like a piston, once, twice, three times.

Harry felt a sickening stab. He was reasonably sure he had a punctured lung. The Korban stamped again, forcing fluid out of Harry’s mouth. Definitely a punctured lung, he thought.

The Korban raised his foot again and this time aimed for Harry’s head, taking a moment to perfect his aim.

Harry reached up and grabbed the top of the Korban’s foot with his left hand; with his right he formed his fingers into a point and jammed them into one of the hexagonal depressions as hard as he could. As he did, Harry could feel something tear: the fleshy valve that closed to keep the water inside the Korban. It tore, and a spray of warm water pushed out of the Korban’s foot and splashed over Harry.

The Korban offered an unspeakably horrible scream as the unexpected pain obliterated any other focus and tried to shake Harry off. Harry hung on, jamming his fingers further into the valve. He wrapped his left arm around the Korban’s lower leg and squeezed, juicing the Korban. Water sprayed on the floor. The Korban hopped, frantically attempting to dislodge Harry, and slipped on the disgorged liquid. It fell backward, causing the entire floor to quake. Harry switched positions and now started pushing on the leg from the bottom, forcing even more water out of it; he could actually see the leg deflating. The Korban howled and writhed; he clearly wasn’t going anywhere. Harry figured that if the judges had any brains at all, they would have to call the round any second now.

Harry looked over to Schmidt. Schmidt looked at him with something akin to raw terror on his face. It took Harry a minute to figure out why.

Oh, right, Harry thought to himself. I’m supposed to lose.

Harry sighed and stopped juicing the Korban, letting the leg go. The Korban, still in pain, eventually sat up and looked at Harry, with a look that Harry could only imagine was complete confusion. Harry walked over and knelt down into the Korban’s face.

“You have no idea how much it kills me to do this,” Harry said, reached out to the Korban’s face and made a grabbing motion. Then he stuck his thumb out from between his index and middle fingers and showed it to the Korban. The Korban stared at him, non-comprehending.

“Look,” Harry said. “I got your nose.“

The Korban swung a haymaker straight into Harry’s temple, and the lights went out.


* * *


“That’s really not the way we expected you to do that,” Schmidt said.

From his bunk, Harry tried very hard not to grimace. Facial expressions hurt. “You asked me to keep it close, and you asked me to lose,” he said, moving his jaw as little as humanly possible.

“Yes,” Schmidt said. “But we didn’t think you’d make it so obvious.”

“Surprise,” Harry said.

“The good news is, it actually worked for us,” Schmidt said. “The Korban leader—who, incidentally, you caused to get drenched in fruit juice when you kicked your competitor into the stands—wanted to know why you let your competition win. We had to admit we told you to lose. He was delighted to hear it.”

“He had money on the other guy,” Harry said.

“No,” Schmidt said. “Well, probably, but that’s not the point. The point was he said that your willingness to follow orders even when winning was in your grasp showed that you could make a short-term sacrifices for long-term goals. He saw you almost winning as making a point about CDF strength, and then losing as making a point about the value of discipline. And since he seemed quite impressed with both, we said those were indeed exactly the points we had wanted to make.”

“So you have brains after all,” Harry said.

“We rolled with the changes,” Schmidt said. “And it looks like we’ll come out of this with an agreement after all. You saved the negotiations, Harry. Thank you.”

“You’re welcome,” Harry said. “And I’ll bill you.”

“I have a message for you from Ambassador Abumwe,” Schmidt said.

“I can’t wait,” Harry said.

“She thanks you for your service and wants you to know she’s recommended you for commendation. She also says that never wants to see you again. Your stunt worked this time but it could just as easily have backfired. All things considered, you’re not worth the trouble.”

“She’s welcome,” Harry said.

“It’s nothing personal,” Schmidt said.

“Of course not,” Harry said. “But I like the idea that I had choreographed having the crap kicked out of me down to that level of detail. Makes me feel like a genius, it does.”

“How do you feel?” Schmidt said. “Are you okay?”

“You keep asking that same very dumb question,” Harry said. “Please, stop asking it.”

“Sorry,” Schmidt said. He turned to go, and then stopped. “It does occur to me that we know the answer to another question, though.”

“What’s that?” Harry said.

“How well you can take a punch,” Schmidt said.

Harry smiled, and then grimaced. “God, Hart, don’t make me smile,” he said.

“Sorry,” Schmidt said again.

“How well do you take a punch, Hart?” Harry asked.

“If this is what it takes to find out, Harry,” Schmidt said, “I don’t want to know.“

“See,” Harry said. “I told you you were soft.“

Schmidt grinned and left.


- end -


Copyright © 2008 by John Scalzi.

Kjartan Lindøe
1. PugC
a nice story i think, a fun read.
Jim Rion
2. JimR
Fun.  Very Fun.  And I see what you did with the jazz hands there...
Is it too late to comment a typo?  First page, forget the paragraph.  Harry says "You get breathe real air."  Should be "get to breathe" I think.
JR Peck
3. stoolpigeon
Another typo first page
"Schmidt frowned. “I don’t know what the means,” he said."
 Awesome, awesome story though.  I think Scalzi is my favorite living sci-fi author right now.
Sherwood Smith
4. Sherwood
Thoroughly enjoyed this story--reminds me a little of Lauber's Retief stories in the best possible way.
6. LameLefty
This was the funniest short story I've read in ages. Typical typical Scalzi snark shines through in nearly every paragraph - brilliant!
Annalee Flower Horne
7. Annalee
Thanks for the read--and the laugh. You brought rubber-ducky-esque fun to my lunch hour.
Mark Ensley
8. mensley
Ha! Excellent fun. So which came first, the story or the illustration?
John Scalzi
9. Scalzi
Actually, the illustration, the title of which is "After the Coup." And I went, "hey, I bet I could work with that."
Irene Gallo
10. Irene
Thanks for playing with a smile, John!  (Nice avatar, by the way) I promise (at least I'll  try) not to put you in that situation again. :-)
Shayera Tangri
11. Shayera
Oh I thoroughly enjoyed that! It was fun finding out someone else out there in your worlds, John. Are you going to do it again?
Patrick Nielsen Hayden
12. pnh
JimR, stoolpigeon -- thanks for the typo-spotting.  Those are fixed.
13. Made in DNA
unable to download this in pdf file. do i have to be a registered user at the site first?
Abigail Sutherland
14. evilrooster
Third typo, maybe, from the first page:
“See, that’s the Colonial Union I know,” Harry said. “Always happy to stick a knife in someone else’s face. But none of this has anything to do with me getting punched in the face.”
Should the first use of "face" not be "back", both because of the figure of speach and to create the opposition with "punched in the face"?

Good story; I enjoy a good romp in an enjoyable universe.
John Scalzi
15. Scalzi
No worries. I have no problem having a cool piece of art in front of me to spur my imagination, you know? 
Well, Harry's a character in two of the OMW books, so I can't claim him as new. But I am glad to get him out as the hero of his own story!
Abigail Sutherland
16. evilrooster
Did I just write "speach"?  Ugh.  Someone take a Bongka to me.
Jamie Grove
17. jamiegrove
@evilrooster I had the same jarring moment with the knife in the face. 
The repetitive use of 'fine' at the start was also a little wonky.
I loved the story though.  Harry can knife me in the face anytime and say fine as much as he might like... Although I would have preferred something nasty happen to Ambassador Abumwe. Not enough satisfaction there.
The joke about Anna Karenina was priceless. 
Kendall Bullen
19. kendallpb
Great story! :-)

Yet another typo: "He slipped of his shoe" should be "he slipped off his shoes."
20. Mary Mark Ockerbloom
More proofreading :-)

"She also says that never wants" should be
"She also says that she never wants"
Great story!
Chris Lohman
21. clohman
Kudos, great work!
John Scalzi
22. Scalzi
Thanks, everyone -- glad you're liking it!
Robin Zimmerman
23. Packbat
Actually, it's not quite Retief, although it has structural similarities - in one of Laumer's stories, the ambassadors would be incompetent and the soldier (who would be Retief) hypercompetent. But the aliens and the contest are quite like a Retief story, this is true.

Also, the "mushroom" bit was hilarious.
Dawn OBryan Lamb
24. Dawno
I enjoyed listening to you read it, John. I think that's a great feature of this site and I hope it continues. Thank you for taking the time to record it.
26. phearlez
I am astonished at John's restraint in not having Harry prevented from starting _The Iliad_ rather than _Anna Karenina_.
27. TheRealNathan
I liked it a lot. Typos and all. A great little story to tide me over 'til Zoe's Tale shows up.
28. Pawel
Cannot download it in Mobipocket or ePub in either Safari or Opera (MacOS X). Instead, a HTML file is downloaded.

Strangely, PDF is downloadable.

Also, in Firefox the links work just fine. Any possibility of fixing it?
eric orchard
30. orchard
Really great story. Totally compelling.
Chris Gladis
31. MShades
Such fun - thanks! I laughed out loud a lot, which is always high marks. And kudos for the xenobiology ideas, too....
Miriam Mulcahy
32. mimbles
That was fun :) LOVED the nose stealing!
Sean Fagan
33. sef
That was quite funny. At least two laugh-out-loud moments.
34. Jim Wright
“Look,” Harry said. “I got your nose.“

I nearly soiled myself, Scalzi. Hysterical.
35. Bryan larson
poor Harry. now what about Jesse (correct spelling?)? :D
Georges Huberty
36. mth
Schmidt reminds me of a fellow student I once had to a paper with --snort--

I had a lot of fun!
Amy Sisson
37. amysisson
I'm on a different computer now, so I don't know if it's switching computers or if the problem has been fixed. But I was able to download and open the PDF, and I'm about to see if this comment will post....

In any case, glad to get the story downloaded. Thanks!
Jonathan Sachsman
38. KingMob
Great story.

Probably should add a disclaimer to the intro so folks who don't know the Old Man's War series feel free to read this. I'm familiar with the series but there was only one sticking point that new readers might have been stumped by, the nature of the CDF genetic engineering, and that was implied by context.
Corey Feldman
39. coreyjf
Another fabulous read from the fantastic Mr. Scalzi. You rock.
John Bastion
40. JustAnotherJohn
Ok, my co-workers are definitely looking at me funny as I hunch over my keyboard and cackle. Great story, thanks John.
Larry Scroggins
41. LeisureSuitLarry
Great story! I really Harry as a character, and I'm glad to see him get featured a little bit. I'd never read any Scalzi before Tor sent out Old Man's War, but I really like the style. I'm actually re-reading it on and off and on basis when I'm at work and I need something that doesn't look like the internet to help me keep from working. Great stuff!
Pablo Defendini
42. pablodefendini
Leave it to Scalzi to come up with the coolest, most far-out alien physiologies. Much win!
Eric Lizotte
43. Ogre
Fun little story. I thought that the Korba were inventive. Of course, I don't mean by them being fish-like, because that's been done a lot; I mean, in the way that their bodies were described, particularly in the way they could grow like that by taking water in. Not sure if I've ever seen that done before in that way. Awesome!
44. cavtroop
John -

thanks for the good read, that was alot of fun. I stumbled on your books when Tor released 'Old Man's War' in .pdf. The next day, I went out and bought every other book I could, and have since enjoyed them all. You have a great way with conversations, and it makes for some fun, easy, yet very interesting reading.

This short was no different, and I look forward to more.
Dusty Jackson
45. SpaceDuzzle
I liked it, great story. Liked the way the dialogue swings along the action.
46. Sundodger
This is definately on my wish list. This Scalzi fella makes me laugh when I least expect it and still maintains a great story. Sci Fi has been way too morbid in the last few years and although the background is pretty grim in the 'Old Man's' universe he shows us some real (green!) people.
Mike Frighetto
47. Mjfrig
That was a fun story. Like Galctic Gladiators. As was mentioned before, the xenobiology was cool. Using the water to grow many times larger and more massive. Just like those toys my son has where the creature grows when put in water. Way to bring that to life!
Brian Napack
49. bnapack
I'm am reminded of corporate politics. Fun story, Mr. Scalzi. Can't wait to read more.
50. Jay Taylor
Thank you for doing what you do, Mr. Scalzi. "After the Coup" was a fun read and I enjoyed listening to your inflictions as you read your story. I had stopped reading for a few years, then I picked up "Old Man's War." I was captivated by your sense of humor and style of writing. The words just flowed with ease. I didn't have to think about what I was reading...I just understood what you were writing, and that made the experience more enjoyable. Within a month I finished all your other published books. And I haven't been disappointed in any of them. Thank you. It's refreshing and a joy to read a good sci-fi story with depth and humor. Orson Scott Card was my favorite author, now you are. Now, I've only 3 books left in Ben Bova's The Grand Tour series to read. So you better clone yourself and give us a book a month! LOL I can't wait to read, "Zoe's Tales." Thank you.
51. Rithban
I haven't read something so refreshing for a while. Light, humourous, and well-structured. It reads like other stories I've read, but who cares? It easily drew me in, didn't jar the suspension of belief, and lifted me out again. The end of the story left me with a satisfaction of time well-spent.
52. mattw
Great story! A good addition to the OMW universe!
Maurizio Manzieri
53. MaurizioManzieri
Last year I loved the Scalzi's novel Old Man's War. In this Italian summer I'm bringing along with me The Ghost Brigades. Yesterday evening I sat in front of my laptop, dimmed the lights, sipped a fresh drink and John read with his own voice the PDF that I had just downloaded.

Wonderful story!

It was a perfect reminder for my next purchase The Last Colony, coming out in a few days as a mass-market edition.

What more could I wish for?
54. Dragonsept Arts
I really enjoyed that, Mr. Scalzi. Thanks a lot.
Dave Rutt
55. rutty
Good stuff - really enjoyed Harry's little adventure. Very, very funny :)
56. DJL
Thank-you John & Tor. That was fun!
Kelly Jensen
57. sisimka
John Scalzi was my favourite 'new' author last year. I have loved everything I've read and actually bought five copies of Old Man's War to give to friends and relatives because no one wanted to pass it on!

Great story!
Daniel Roy
58. triseult
Thanks to Tor for sharing this online, and to John Scalzi for writing it. It brought me back to the awesome fun of "Old Man's War". The use of the universal language of childish gestures was just cool.
Dianne Owens
59. keikomushi
Scalzi, I never knew gods carried lazer pistols. A great sci-fi story with a likable character that I'd love to see more of. Although I am more familiar with your blog, I have to say that your description of Hart's thoughts have made me consider how to work internal monologue for my own writing. Then again, if we can't learn from other writers who can we learn from? o_O
60. blackbart99
Great little story. I could picture the fight precisely. But my ribs hurt with sympathy pains for
Harry. Takin' one for the species....
61. Makanikai
Awesome short. Just read free version of Old Man's War on my Kindle and immediately hit the nets looking for more of your work. After reading this I bought the Ghost Brigades on my Kindle and am going to kill my Tuesday by staying up all Monday night reading. Thanks for your work, it truly takes me into the future.
62. Oldasdirt
Very good! This takes me back to John W. Campbell's "Analog Science Fact and Fiction".
63. smarti101
Loved the story!
Sammy Jay
64. Malebolge
Very nice, very classy mixing-up of classic sci-fi stuff with more relaxed prose. Liked the inflatable frog thingos, too.
Shawn Elliott
65. Elliottsm
Thanks for the short story, made my conference call that much better. Keep up the great work.
66. alejo699
Fun stuff! Always enjoy your stuff, it always makes me smile. Your imagery is crisp and resonant for me.

I notice folks are posting typos here -- are you looking for proofing? I noticed a couple of things but I don't want to be a nitpicker.
Jeff Soules
67. DeepThought
Hmm, I'm late to the party -- have had this tab open for a couple of weeks now.

Great story, and Mr. Scalzi, I'm a big fan.

But... did you seriously just name a type of cudgel a "Bongka"? Like-- bonker? Something you bonk someone with? Oh dear...
68. phoenixjim
Very enjoyable read - since receiving my first story by Scalzi via Tor's free ebook program, I've been buying them up - Keep 'em coming :)
69. Timesink
What a great feature for; I'm bookmarking now.

Mr. Scalzi, great to see another piece of your work, and another fine story in the epic saga of man vs. sponge.
Steven McCollum
70. mucno
I thoroughly enjoyed this one, John your images and dialogue always keep me going. Reminiscent of my old morale nights on the Dallas, although we didn't have Bongkas but might make a great addition. Well met Mr.S, well met.
Robert Nelson
71. bobnelsontor
Worthy of Retief.

That is a very high compliment...
Max Evans
73. marvmax
Great story. I just downloaded and read all the short stories here but this one was best. Can't wait to read the OMW now.

I thought the stab in the face comment was not a typo just a saying that had changed for some reason over the ages.
Gonzalo San Martin
74. Gonzalo
Fun story - the interplay between Harry and Schmidt is what made it.
John Doe
75. munchysnacks
Great story, I always have like the author and this is no different hope to see more from John!!
76. flylow
Enjoyed the story. Could easily morph into a good series of 4 books or more. Clearly the diplomatic vs military humor is very contagious, at least to me. Mr. Scalzi, the story was refreshing, humorous, and probably pretty close to the truth. OH YEAH!!!!!!!!!
Rich Bennett
77. Neuralnet
Thanks for the entertaining read... great story. I am embarrassed to say that this is the first story by Scalzi I have ever read. But I am definitely going out to pick up a book or two by him now.
M Linden
78. mlinden
“I already have very deep reservations about this plan,” Harry said.

Priceless, snappy, back-and-forth dialogue, much like in Old Man's War (the only one in the series I've been able to get to). Great story!

As for Deep Thought's comment about the origin of the term "Bongka"...I could see this as a translation error. The alien judge says, in its own language, "This is a thing we bonk each other with" which is translated into "Bonker". Hart, hearing this translation, says "It's, uh..a Bongka".

Exactly the kind of thing that so endeared the BrainPal translators to the CDF soldiers, and exactly the kind of gag I would have expected from Mr Scalzi.
79. Daktar
If this is Mr. Scalzi's usual output, I'm definitely going to have to check him out sometime in the near future.
80. Catmanhunting
...I -thought- the name was familiar! I really enjoyed the OMW stories I picked up, and Scalzi is on the (NOT short) list of authors I follow around; thanx for brightening the saturday after xmas.
82. BarryMoss
This was a great read. I've just finished reading Zoe's Tale and this was a great little trip back to the Old Man's War Universe.
83. jojo375

Great short story. I was very entertained.
Cheshil Dixit
84. Cheshil
Loved it... Can't believe it's been sitting here for a year!
Greg Walker
85. theseoman
Thanks for providing this story, great story.
86. Paraph
Looks like one typo slipped through; towards the end, in the sentence 'The point was he said that your willingness to follow orders even when winning was in your grasp showed that you could make *a* short-term *sacrifices* for long-term goals.', you should either skip the article *a* to make it plural, or shorten *sacrifices* to make it a singular, Can't have it both ways, I'm afraid.
87. Ray Anselmo
Genius writing and laugh-out-loud funny. I see why it finished #2 in the Locus poll for short story of the year.
Geoffrey Campey
89. geosta
Up to your usual high standard John, very fun read.

It was unfortunate when I got tos this bit however:
“Swell,” Harry said, and handed the water bottle back to Schmidt. “Words of wisdom for this round?”

“Mind your ankles,” Schmidt said.

“You’re a big help,” Harry said. The horn blew and he stepped back onto the gym floor.

I was sitting on the bus on the way to work and had a 'lol' moment, with everyone on the bus thinking I was a nutter.

Thanks John, you're a big help at convincing others I'm sane :D
91. Esck86
Great story, John. I'm a huge fan of the OMW series and I was so excited to see you returning to the universe here. I sincerely hope you keep 'em coming!
94. Madwand
Well, this is a bit overdue but here goes; a friend sent me a link to this story. Soon after he had to lend me his copy of Old Man's War, since it wasn't available in our bookstores. I was hooked.
Now a proud owner of all four OMW books, I can't wait for The God Engines to come out in paperback.
Also, Mr. Scalzi, please re-visit the OMW universe!
Thanks. :)
95. Tsahi Levent-Levi
This is so much fun.
You must write more in this universe, otherwise my science fiction life won't be the same.

Franky Estanol
Great Read!
I love your work. Your old man war series is one of my favorite and first science fiction.
Thanks a lot :D
Anastasia Kellen
98. yanktongirl
Too danged much fun, I tell ya'. Favorite line so far (will probably re-read again later): "And now, as you can see, I’m going Spartan so a midget can whack me with a stick." Classic Scalzi fun.
Roger Sanik
99. sanik28
Hey John,
this was great!
thank you
Robert Lloyd
100. RobertAllan
I found myself reading the last colony into the early hours last night/this morning as I had to finish it. It's many years since I've done that and I read a lot. JS has created an interesting universe full of real characters.
I also noticed the Retief feel to the above but even in a short story these characters are more human. My automatic buy list is quite short but John Scalzi is firmly on there.
101. Granny to 3 Boys
Enjoyed it very much.
102. S. F. Warwick
Being compared to Laumer is a singular honor for any writer; he was a truly great, if under-appreciated, writer. Probably because of the success of his Retief stories, which were considered "light". If anyone cared to look, the Retief stories were what readers eagerly anticipated every month. "After the Coup" does not need to be compared to Laumer's writing word for word, it stands as a well written story that adheres to Laumer's ideal; entertainment. He didn't hang on the critics opinions, he entertained us.
As does John Scalzi, who I hereby award the "Golden Groaci Nose Flute" in honor of this delightful little story. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
103. CK Luchini
Loved it! Very funny story. You don't get bored with this, that is for sure!
Joe Coffman
104. ceoj
One of the best reads I've had in ages. Keep it coming.
106. tmso
Yeah, noticed all the typos, but excellent, humorous story.
Michael Burke
107. Ludon
I had read this story a few weeks back but didn't feel like restating what others had said. The other day I picked up a copy of Gordon Dickson's Naked To The Stars and read it for my first time. I found myself thinking about After the Coup while reading that one. That's not a complaint. Naked... gave me some things to think about but I came away from it thinking that this short story is a much better read - a more entertaining read.

I may just have to try Old Man's War.
Robert Watson
108. Beanpolewatson
I love the pacing. Sometimes short stories can feel too hurried. This one felt just right.
109. michelle wolfe
Its an extremely amazing story!
melinda hills
110. melindahills
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112. MikeOSx13
Wow, this is long. I don't have time to read it now but I will in a few days.
114. Judy in SATX
Reading this again and looking forward to Harry and Schmidt's futher adventures in The Human Division!
115. Carlam
I just discovered OMW and currently working my way through The Last Colony (yeah, I know, better late than never)... I Loved this story.. And, I seriously looking forward to The Human Division..
116. TMarie
Nice piece. I got distracted by all the unnecessary dialog tags
117. Loved it
Great story. I hope you write many more full length books in this universe after Human Division. At least 20 more.
Rob Munnelly
118. RobMRobM
Had to look back at this after reading Human Division. Fun story and the full novel is just as fun. When I read this on Tor, I had forgotten that Harry was one of John Perry's classmates when they entered service together.

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