
There are some kinds of books where I either donât want to read them at all or I desperately want to immerse myself in tons of them. I hadnât re-read Elizabeth Moonâs Serrano books (now available in omnibus editions as Heris Serrano, The Serrano Connection and The Serrano Succession) since I first read them all in one gulp. They do a lot of things right. Theyâre military SF with good adventures, a believable and effective military, and a much better done background than you often see in this sort of thing. I like them, theyâre a lot of fun, and it wouldnât take much for me to really love them, the way I love the Miles books or Cherryhâs Alliance Union series. Theyâre very good, and I thoroughly enjoyed them, but they fall short of brilliant.
Each book has an exciting adventure plot, but there isnât really an overall plot arc to the series. The ongoing theme is the way rejuvenation affects society. The Familias Regnant is a hereditary oligarchy with a king, occupying several hundred planets. Ordinary peopleâwell, ordinary planets for that matter, have a patron family who is Seated in Council to speak for them. Thereâs a largely hereditary space fleet, which they need, because they have active enemies, the Benignity of the Compassionate Hand on one side, the Bloodhorde on another, and the various split planets of Texans on another, as if they didnât have enough internal dissent, piracy, traitors and mutiny for anyone. Fortunately they also have a border with the civilized Guerni Republic, the only place in these books Iâd be willing to live.
No real spoilers.
As well as making the military very realistic, Moon does well at a number of things. First, this is a pleasantly multicoloured and multicultural future. The Serranos are black-skinned, the Suizas are brown-skinned, other families are described as being other colours. The cultures are the cultures of the distant futureâthese people left Earth a long time ago, and there tend to be planetary cultures with some roots on Earth, rather than Earth cultures. They do work as genuinely diverse planets with different languages, accents, and priorities. The planetary culture we see most of is Brazilian-derived Altiplano. Also, I like the way that are terrorists are from a Texan-derived planet, and that the Familias have problems distinguishing it from the half a dozen other Texan-derived planets. Oddly, when people were asking about multi-coloured futures I didnât see these mentioned, nor did I remember that about them.
Along similar lines to the cultural diversity, I like the way they have fashionsânot just in clothing, but fadsâa generation ago there was a fad for giving children odd names, like Brunhilde and Raffaele, rather than normal names like Gari and Tighe. Thereâs a fad for horse-riding and horse-breeding, a fad which one of the characters is really into, but, realistically, a lot of others find extremely boring. Things change. Events in earlier books have long term repercussions. Generations have different ideas. And there are a lot of older people, especially older women. This is notable because itâs really unusual. Several of the major characters in these books are old women. Thereâs an ongoing riff on the fact that many of them are aunts, involved in the lives of their nephews and nieces. Some of them are rejuvenated and look young, others arenât. It shouldnât be unusual to have older women with their own spaceships, older women who are admirals, chemists, competitive riders, etc, but it really is. Moon also does well at making families feel like families, with the kinds of sibling rivalry and generational infighting that families have, along with closing ranks against outsiders when necessary.
The reason I donât love these books is because they have too many points of view. Moon will give any character a point of view if itâs useful to the plot for the reader to know whatâs going on there, or why the bad guys are doing what theyâre doing. This tends to make the focus diffuse. I donât care about all the characters equally, and if I do get to care about a minor character I donât then want them to be killed or their point of view abandoned once theyâre not relevant any more. Theyâre all over the place. I wish Moon would write something like this in first person, or in very tight third from one point of view only, or two at most. Moon writes really well when she doesnât get too diffuse, sheâs really good at doing points of view. There are a couple of times where characters have horrific things happen (but donât worry, they get better) and sheâs wonderful at getting inside their heads in awful situations.
My favourite is definitely Once a Hero, and a lot of that is because itâs much more focused, sticking closely to Esmay Suiza for most of the book. Of course, the other reason I like Once a Hero best is because it has a really awesome repair ship thatâs so huge ordinary space cruisers can fly inside it. Itâs realistically easy to get lost in. Reviewers tend to say things like "Exciting action, I couldnât put it down" about books like this, because if you say "Thereâs this awesome repair ship," people tend to look at you funny. Nevertheless, thereâs an awesome repair ship, and you get to spend a lot of time there so that when thereâs a battle you understand completely whatâs happening.
So, thereâs lots of action-adventure, thereâs mature reflection on action, thereâs romance, thereâs rejuvenation and the problems it causes society if the rich are going to live essentially forever, and there are young people growing up and finding love. Theyâre fun.
Jo Walton is a science fiction and fantasy writer. Sheâs published eight novels, most recently Half a Crown and Lifelode, and two poetry collections. She reads a lot, and blogs about it here regularly. She comes from Wales but lives in Montreal where the food and books are more varied.
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VIEW ALL BY · Friday October 23, 2009 02:37pm EDT
Wow, that's some king... ;)
The thing that has always bothered me about Moon's writing is that the heroines always have something really horrible happen to them in their childhoods.
I mean really, why couldn't Esmay Suiza have been a happy, normal little girl who wanted to go explore the stars? Did she really need to have been abused to make her more of a heroine? IMO it adds nothing to the character or the story, and makes me wary of reading any of Moon's other works.
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VIEW ALL BY · Friday October 23, 2009 04:28pm EDT
I still think The Deed of Paksenarrion is the only great thing Moon have written*. However I have not read her latest, Vatta's War. Should I?
*While I do love Sassinak, I do not think I can call that great.
VIEW ALL BY · Friday October 23, 2009 08:31pm EDT
Her really outstanding book is The Speed of Dark which I reviewed here a while ago. It's a long time since I read the Paks books, and I have only read them once. I should get to them again next time I'm in that kind of mood.
Saturday October 24, 2009 01:24am EDT
VIEW ALL BY · Saturday October 24, 2009 09:01pm EDT
The first three volumes (compiled in Heris Serrano) always seemed to me to have been a nice self-contained story arc, kind of a romp, a fun frothy read, with enough deeper issues showing through for the characters and the universe to make it REALLY fun.
And then it grew, and got darker and deeper in the process, but as Moon herself has written, the original worldbuilding for Familias Regnant space was never intended to bear that level of expansion, and she took it about as far as it could go.
I love the Heris Serrano arc, and I love the Esmay Suiza saga, and I loved the way she wrapped it all up at the end, but I do feel it's a bit of a chimera.
VIEW ALL BY · Sunday October 25, 2009 01:48am EDT
There's going to be new books about Paksenarrian (well, about what happens next), and I'm looking forward to them eagerly. You might time your reread around that.
VIEW ALL BY · Monday October 26, 2009 06:16am EDT
I thought that the world building managed to hang together for nine(?) books very well, and still left me wanting more, while the I found the Vatta's War background (presumably intended from to support a series from the start) to be lacking something.
Monday October 26, 2009 06:31am EDT
I agree - one is left expecting to find all the bad guys have twirly moustaches.
I also find I can't really believe in a space-faring society whose members all seem to have the impulse control of a three year old, and who, as you say, seem to value torture, rape and destruction above anything constructive.
Not that there weren't some great high points as well - enough to get me to buy the whole series.
Speed of Dark, Remnant Population and the Paks trilogy are her standout books, IMHO.
Saturday November 14, 2009 02:10am EST
Love Jo Waltonâs very accurate âAunties in Spaceâ observation. Moon has all these sharp, fascinating âolderâ women as real players in both the Serrano/Suiza (Lady Cecilia, Miranda, Esmayâs Landbride grandmother, that Professor of Texas history) and Vatta (Aunt Grace) universes â and that fabulous old lady in Remnant Population.
They routinely drive, direct, frame, and impact the storylines--sometimes with more heart, brains, and passion than the front-and-center lead characters (Esmay, Herris Serrano, Brun Meagher Thornbuckle, and Kylara Vatta).
The observation about the heroines surviving some horrible trauma plus betrayal is also dead on â hadnât thought of it quite that way. Esmay in a childhood assault in wartime that her family pretends never happened, Herrisâ unfair forced resignation from the Fleet â and her familyâs lack of support, Brunâs hideous ordeal in New Texas and picking up the pieces after her dadâs assassination, and the brutal attack on Kyâs family. And of course, Paks' rise, tragic fall, and touching resurrection.
Moon is a sophisticated, delightfully inventive, deep world-builder with a raft of fascinating characters. Her stuff moves, and she pulls you right along. Sheâs terrific at showing how unaddressed flaws in her various societiesâ political/social/legal structures have dangerous--even fatal--consequences.
To me, she's right in there with Lois McMaster Bujold. [And wouldnât worlds collide if that sawed-off little git, Miles Vorkosigan, ever got a crack at Brun? Not longterm--as children of Great Men (and Great Women),they're way too much alike --highstrung, relentless, out to prove something.]