Fri
Oct 7 2011 11:00am

Steampunk Appreciations: Clay & Susan Griffith’s The Greyfriar

Steampunk Appreciations: Clay & Susan Griffith’s The GreyfriarHarkening back to classic vampire tales, Clay and Susan Griffith’s The Greyfriar (Vampire Empire, Book 1) is a delightful, entirely non-sparkly, gritty vampire tale on a grand and sweeping scale and a great look at what humanity means. This is no “vampires are integrated into our society!” story, but one of devastation, fear, romance and airships. The main character, Princess Adele, who is heir to the Equatorian Empire — one based in Egypt, founded from the remains of the British Empire — is struggling with her heritage and duties. Engaged to Senator Clark, an American war hero, to form an alliance between the two super-powers and about to form a marriage that will precipitate a world-devastating war against the vampires, Adele is strong and powerful from the very beginning.

The Greyfriar is an alternate history in which vampires rule most of the North while humans have retained and grown power in the Southern Hemispheres. The vampires, a different race, have significantly greater senses — except that of touch. Without much elaboration, the authors paints this monsters as entirely different from humans in fascinating ways, from the very beginning.

With some brilliantly placed foreshadowing and subtle twisting of expectations, the Griffith’s start blurring the divisions and delineations they just set up, as well as the genres they play with. The titular hero, Greyfriar — so named for a small human church he cares for — is a dashing hero out of a romance novel, set largely against the brooding and dramatic Scottish climes, while the powerful Adele is a heroine worthy of an adventure novel. In addition, the setting is a lovely cross of horror and steampunk. The story is a self-contained and neatly concluded adventure — kidnap and rescue/escape — but the book contains seeds that show the beginnings of a much larger story on a large and fascinating scale. There are hints of racial and inter-empire politics, tantalising teases about magic and religion, as well as glimpses into the powers that Adele herself has but doesn’t understand yet.

The relationship between Greyfriar — and his alter-ego — and Adele is one of the true gems in this book. The initial, girlish fascination, followed by the betrayal as truths emerge is pretty standard for a romantic plot, but rather than following romance heroines into blind forgiveness and lust, Adele slowly re-learns just who Greyfriar is as a person and comes to truly love him for who he is, not the romanticized ideal she’d originally thought.

This slow growth of maturity is evident not only in her relationships, but also in her character. It is no wonder that Greyfriar falls so in love with her so quickly; it’s almost impossible not to do so as the reader, too. Adele holds a special place in my heart for the slow and painful way she grows and becomes a brilliant heroine — and a kind, thoughtful one. She actively listens and learns — both to vampires and humans from different walks of life than her own — and then uses that to become stronger and fight her own battles. Over the course of this trilogy she is going to become a force to be reckoned with in world, and a heroine to be lauded in the literary vampire canon.

The entire cast of characters are almost uniformly gush-worthy, with particular love for Cesare’s war chief, the monstrous, yet passionate Flay, and the Ghurka Colonel Anhalt. Only such a bright and varied cast could hold their own against the fascinating backdrop of the setting and the epic politics which hint at the greater plot and intrigue of the trilogy. I wanted to focus on one small facet of the politics at play that fascinated me. The brash American, Clark, brags about their new chemical warfare — and propulsion among other things — while the Equatorians stick, steadfastly, to their steam-powered methods. It’s a small section in book one, though it’s going to come to play a larger role in later books, but as the characters grow and mature, we also see the world changing and moving into the future. As far as I’ve found, this realistic look at great moments in history — and particularly in alternate histories — The Greyfriar is unique among its kind. It may be the only steampunk-esque book that deals with emerging and alternate technologies and doesn’t let the world and its people stagnate. As well as promoting a future of improved harmony — or at least reduced butchery — it begins to deal with societies on the brink of great change culturally as well.


Nina Lourie swashed and buckled her way through The Greyfriar with fangs out and Spiced Cranberry Cider in her goblet. It’s looks like blood and tastes like the most delicious farm hand you could nibble on!

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4 comments
Peter Tijger
1. Peter-Tijger
I have been looking out for this book for a while now, but I just can't get my hands on it in the very few stores we have over here in Amsterdam that sell English/American books. I definitely want to read this one.
I guess I should order it online......but I'm an oldfashioned kind of guy, who likes to wander around in bookstores, music stores, comic book stores and the likes, from time to time, just to come across that one, or maybe a few things that are on the "to buy" list.
Nina Lourie
2. supertailz
@bakema NL I totally understand the desire to wander around bookstores; is there any way you can ask your local bookstore to order it in? Tell them you'd really rather give your money to them? :) On the other hand, this was a B&N staff pick, so perhaps it wouldn't hurt to use an online company oooonce in a while? You could make up for it by recommending something awesome and Dutch for us to try to find over here?
Ruby Scarlett
3. Ruby Scarlett
You've convinced me, it sounds great! In stark contrast with Bakema's comment above, I've just ordered it off my Kindle. Thanks Nina!
Ruby Scarlett
4. James Davis Nicoll
Ah, yes: this is the one where Japan seizes Singapore for its own in 1870. This would pit the Royal Navy, then arguably the most powerful one on the planet at the time, against Imperial Japanese Navy, which had only been founded the year before. In fact, 1870 is the year an ambitious plan to expand the fledgling IJN to 200 ships failed because of a lack of resources. I find it totally plausible that a new and small navy struggling to modernize itself could defeat a navy of 530+ vessels, over 60 of which were ironclads. The fact that this conflict would come at the end of a lengthy naval arms race between the Western powers and in this particular book's setting in a period when the British would have been absolutely desperate to hold onto what territory they had only makes Japan's victory in this matter that much more believable.

This is also one where the airships use sails to make themselves dirigible. Well, I can't imagine aviation research results from the 18th century would have had time to filter out into the wider world so there's no reason for people to know why that can't work.

At any point in the series, do we find out what any of the Equatorial natives think about the unrequested governence assistance the northerners provided them with, and if they (as I did the whole time I was reading the book) see the parallels between their exploitation and what's going on in Eurasia? Or do they remain the largely faceless, agentless props they are in the first book?

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