Mon
Nov 23 2009 10:50am
What If? and What Happens Next? Two secret weapons for aspiring writers

I’m a believer that we are all storytellers—many of us are good ones. We spin tales whenever we tell a joke, or recount the day’s events at the dinner table, or roll a D20, or recap the most recent episode of V to our buddies. I’m also a SF thriller novelist and, unlike some literary snobs I read about (and give the mental middle finger to), I believe we all have at least one great story inside us, taking up space, rattling at the cage bars, hungry to be let loose. That fictional story may very well be a good one, too.

You’re a SFF fan, which means you’re extremely imaginative. That’s good. Imagination is the key ingredient to being a tale-teller. If you’ve got a novel, short story or screenplay prowling inside your guts—but have never made the attempt to set it free—I, as Ambassador For All Writers Who Claim Ridiculous Ambassadorships For These Occasions, proclaim it’s high time you stopped listening to that fretful voice in your noggin (It won’t be any good . . . You don’t have time to write . . . It’s all been said before), plant your bootie in a chair, and get typing. You’re not getting any younger, ya know—and you’ll never learn to fly if you don’t flap those wings.

Still with me? Still jonesing to tell a tale? Killer diller. I want to help you. Now I’m a young writer, with just a few books under my belt. My books are not award-winning highbrow masterpieces. They’re high-tech and supernatural thrillers, designed to keep you gasping and guessing. If you’re cool with taking advice from a potboiler-writin’ pup, then we’re in business. Check the next ’graph.

I’ve learned a lot about writing and myself, the deeper I dive into the fiction game. But there were two secret weapons I learned early on that still help me through the brainstorming, outlining and writing processes. They’re stupefyingly simple mantras, but I’ve found them to be of incalculable value: “What If?” and “What Happens Next?”

What If?
If you’ve got a book in your brain, you’re already living this mantra. But since your story’s not yet on paper, you’re only halfway there. It’s mission-critical that you fully embrace What If? because it helps see you through beyond The Big Idea, the initial hook of your story.

What If? is precisely what it sounds like: Asking What If?, and permitting yourself to get creative and answer the question. These are questions about your story, its characters, and the world in which they occupy. You give yourself permission to play, to let your imagination run wild by exploring your Big Idea.

If it feels like work, you’re doing it wrong—unbuckle that creative seatbelt and let your mind have a blast. Take notes while you do this; if you don’t, it’s nothing more than mental masturbation. Such stuff has a place, but not it’s when you’re trying to eke a book (or other story) out of your brain. Taking notes means you’re making a commitment. You’re not necessarily committed to those ideas, but you are committed to making your story a reality.

What If . . .

  • . . . a farmboy rose above his lowly circumstances, embraced his family’s secret past, and attained the skills to take down an intergalactic fascist government?

  • . . . a good cop is murdered by bad people, is resurrected as a cyborg to protect the public, but pursues revenge against his killers?

  • . . . a fussbudget spaceship officer protests when an alien-infested co-worker is brought aboard, and finds herself fighting for survival when the creature slays her crew?

  • . . . seven men are kidnapped by the government, discover that they’re human clones, and must hunt an anarchy-hungry psychopath—who is also the man they were cloned from? (That’s my book, 7th Son: Descent.)

You’re a clever person, so you already see where I’m going with this. Play. Tease your brain, build those Big Ideas, and use What If? to further build upon those them. The very best writers are great liars: they use convincing details and plausible mythologies to support their Big Ideas. Most of that hails directly from What If?

What Happens Next?
Once you’ve excavated enough Big Ideas (and supporting ideas) using What If?, it’s time to start writing your tale, or outlining it. That’s where What Happens Next? comes in.

Have you ever started writing a story, got about a quarter of the way in and then . . . uh oh . . . gave up because you had no clue where it was going? That goes away with What Happens Next?. You’re committed not only to your Big Idea, but to moving the story forward, to getting to the finish line. Because that’s what writers do.

Now I’m an outliner who uses What Happens Next? during that planning process, but you can be an “organic” writer and leverage it with equal success. It’s an elegant tactic. You come to the end of an outline beat (or written chapter) and ask yourself the dumbest question in the world—What happens next?

You ask this fully understanding that the only way to move ahead is to answer this dumb question.

What happens next, man? You’ve got a bunch of Big Ideas culled from your What If? riff sessions. You’ve got your characters, your mythology, your hook. What happens next?

What Happens Next when . . .

  • . . . that farmboy, who’s too afraid to leave his current locale, has everything he holds dear destroyed by those fascist soldiers?

  • . . . that robot-cop stops a routine holdup, but the perp he’s arresting is one of his murderers?

  • . . . that fussbudget officer must start ignoring procedure to combat the monster roaming her ship?

  • . . . the seven human clones discover that their villainous progenitor has left a trail of clues that might lead them to his location?

I could go on, but you’re five steps ahead of me now. What Happens Next? is the narrative carrot on the stick, the even-cooler reward for creating cool content so far. You’re moving your plot and characters forward, and increasing your commitment to your story. Nothing’s more satisfying.

If you’re keen to craft fiction, I hope you give these two techniques for a spin—and I hope you find value in them. Of course, there are a dozen-dozen other “secret weapons” for emerging writers. What are yours? Let’s give a helpful conversation going. Share your experiences in the comments.


J.C. Hutchins is the author of the sci-fi thriller novel 7th Son: Descent. Originally released as free serialized audiobooks, his 7th Son trilogy is the most popular podcast novel series in history. J.C.’s work has been featured in The New York Times, The Washington Post and on NPR’s Weekend Edition.

12 comments
Leslie Annis
1. Lannis
I love just batting around ideas!

I'd say my secret weapon to add to the outline list you've got isn't quite "what happens next?" but "how could it get worse?" (to add tension). The only thing you have to remember is that there has to be a way out (eventually), though of course, there's always some things that can change irrevocably... that's the fun! Having your protagonist dig themselves out of a deep dark hole is mighty redeeming, right? And the suspense of whether they will succeed or not...

Great post! We (aspiring writers) can all use reminders to get back on track. Thanks! :)
Angel Banchev
2. Tiranas
I finished earlier today John Ringo`s The Legacy of the Aldenata series Book 2 and in the Afterword he says exactly the same thing. That those two questions are the best starting point to tell your story and that thinking about the answers to those questions the story unfolds step by step in your mind and in time you start to see the different paths your story and characters could undertake.Not exactly in those words but that is what he meant. So your post just blew my mind off :D To add to the discusion, one can always use the Flashback technic, meaning you puth your hero in a situation and try to explain how he got there. For example Roger Zelazny uses this trope quite efectively, like in Doorways In The Sand. It would be interesting to see what other people come up with for sugestions :)
eastwood
3. eastwood
Great Article, it hit me right up side the head and makes me want to quit everything and finally unleash myself on to the ol' laptop...
However, I can liken myself only to that of a closet homosexual. I have a life path that is set out and a family that wouldn't be supportive of me dedicating the time/effort that it would require to telling my story - my "coming out"...so I am left in the realm of actually living the WHAT IF...What if I try and fail...What if I try and can't fully commit..

That being said, I can only ask myself what happens next...do I sit down and TRY or keep repressing the only thing that I want to do and carry on ...

to be continued
eastwood
4. ehudwill
My latest novel idea started with the question, what if our thoughts could affect reality. Allowing our fear, anger, and desires to take shape becoming creatures driven by that emotion/thought.
eastwood
5. drunes
To eastwood: Try, my friend, try. Find the time, even if it's only an hour or paragraph a day. I think you'll find a lot of encouragement here.
Apolonia Skywalk
6. niaskywalk
Of course, there are a dozen-dozen other “secret weapons” for emerging writers. What are yours?


Finding time to write really is difficult, I have heard of writers keeping a window open on whatever handy computing/writing device they have and writing a story one sentence at a time during short lulls in their work days.

Writing at lunch instead of surfing the net (or reading or shopping or whatever can really be held off until after work) is another way to get some time. Talking into a recording device on the driver home, writing/plotting/planning on the commute, whatever. You can end up with an interesting story that merely needs editing. That can be reserved for a weekend once a month or so.

I personally keep a collection of storylines, short jokes, or various other inspirations as I am working during the work day. I recently collected as many loose bits as I could and put it on a flash drive so I can take it with me everywhere.
Alex Brown
7. Milo1313
For me, the hardest bit is realizing that everything I just wrote is boring, ordinary, uninteresting cliche. I've found the best way to avoid that, or just to kick-start some new ideas that you might never have thought of, is to have someone give you a completely random scenario (or, as my friends and I shout to each other, "There's a tiger in a cage by the beach. WRITE IT!!!") and write a short story about it.

The story doesn't have to be written well, just written. It's that spark of sudden and unexpected creativity that spurns me. And 9 times outta 10 I've ended up using a modified version of said new story in my old one and changed the entire tone/direction of what I was working on into something muuuuuch better.
Alex Brown
8. Milo1313
@niaskywalk: I do just that. I am a permanent day dreamer and always have pen and paper ready. I come up with the best ideas and dialogue in the middle of the shower or in between patrons at work and Have To Get It Written Down before I forget it.

I also find that speaking aloud in the accents/voices of the characters helps me come up with dialogue that sounds natural and not "written", you know? Downside: It makes you look crazy on the bus. Upside: No one bothers you on the bus and you're sure to get a seat ;)
Angus McIntyre
9. angusm
Screenwriter Yuri Baranovsky published a good piece about writing recently. He's talking about web shows, but much of it applies to any kind of writing. See: yuribaranovsky.com

One interesting concept that he discusses is the idea of a Central Question: a yes/no question that lies at the core of your story. For that story about the spaceship officer and her monster, the question is "Will she survive/defeat the critter?" For your young farmboy, it's "Will he overthrow the evil empire?" For the police officer, it's probably "Will he avenge his own murder?" If you prefer, you could relax the 'yes/no' requirement and add the word 'How' in front of each of those. Or you could assume that 'Will X?' always implies a secondary question of 'How will X?'

The more I think about it, the more I think that a Central Question is probably a good thing to have. If you don't have one, it's a lot harder to draw readers in and hold their attention.
eastwood
10. YuriBaranovsky
Thanks for the mention! Glad you enjoyed my blog.

If you guys have any questions, feel free to email me or post right on my site -- I'll be glad to answer any writing-related questions.

A Central Question really helps you narrow down your focus. It forces you to focus on the main story, even when you're doing subplots (i.e. how does Subplot A directly relate/help answer the central question?) and it really tightens up your story structure.

Thanks, guys!
Yuri
www.yuribaranovsky.com
eastwood
11. Author
What a good article. Those two very simple questions are ones I used continuously when I was writing my first book (published earlier this year, Randolph's Challenge Book One - The Pendulum Swings) and I am now using them to good advantage in the construction of book two in the series.

There are a couple of other techniques I use to enhance these simple questions. The first is that I apply them to the planning phase of the book to create a short paragraph for each chapter, basically so I know where I'm going. It doesn't mean I can't take detours or vary the route along the way, but I find much comfort in knowing, on any journey, where I'm headed.

The other thing I do is attach someone I know to each of my characters. That enables me to ask the question, 'What would they do in this situation?' It ensures consistency of behaviour of the character and also adds to making the characters believable.

Chris Warren
Author and Freelance Writer
Randolph's Challenge Book One - The pendulum Swings
eastwood
12. Ludon
Very interesting post. Reminds me of a conversation I took part in many years back in which we were discussing the differences between science fiction / fantasy writing from "mainstream' writing. I put forth the notion that "what if" was the main difference. I explained that general fiction and romance fiction generally deal with "there was a guy/girl who . . ." based stories while historical and war stories deal with "there was a time when . . ." stories. Science fiction, on the other hand, is built upon the question of "what if . . ."

The others in the conversation thought I was taking a too simplistic approach. It's nice to now see others taking that "simplistic" approach.

Mike

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